What I actually look for in the first page of a new book now
I used to give every book fifty pages before deciding, out of some sense of fairness to the author. I've shortened that considerably, and what I actually look for now happens within the first page: does a specific, concrete detail show up before any general scene-setting does.
A first page that opens with a specific object, a specific smell, a specific overheard sentence, tends to belong to a writer who trusts the reader to build the world from evidence. A first page that opens with broad scene-setting β the year, the weather, the mood of the town β often belongs to a writer who doesn't yet trust the reader to do that work themselves.
It's not a perfect filter, and I've been wrong both directions. But it's cut my average time-to-decision from fifty pages to about three, and my hit rate on books I actually finish has gone up since I started trusting it.
Related reading: The Reader's Guide to Actually Finishing More (and Better) Books and Why the psychological thriller works better on the page than on screen.
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The concrete-detail-first filter is the same thing I look for in a submitted first page. Trusting the reader is the whole skill.